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Hey there, First of all, liking the dark mode on this game! perfect for late night gaming session. The visuals are clean and the UI is pretty intuitive (I immediately picked up the flipping through books the first time, I love that we can "stack documents"). The way this game drive the story is awesome, there's not a lot of hand-holding, but rather you are let to your own demise to read through the lore. The process of uncovering these information felt pretty natural too. Oh man, and that ending give me chills!

Anyway, having finished the game, I would like to give few feed backs as well:

- The typing felt very tedious, not sure if that's intended to simulate the grueling paperwork. Maybe we could add copy and paste here?

- During the gameplay, the aspect that caught me the most  is how we are trying to do a social engineering with some of our contacts. It would be more interesting if some choice led to dire consequences.

A little bonus: I also created a gameplay video for this game :)

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Thank you for you time and your video! I'm very grateful to you!

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This is great!! Imo, the lack of color contrast in the words makes it hard to read sometimes, so it may cause strain in some people. But I love it overall. The twist surprised me too. 10/10

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Привет из соседнего Томска. Игра очень увлекла, интересная идея, превосходная реализация. Только есть одна проблема, с которой столкнулся, по всему видимому, не только я. На этапе заполнения бланка о супруге и ребенке неоткуда брать информацию о них. Я несколько раз заходил в чат с Вероникой, но там никаких подсказок нету :(  Это баг или я такой слепошарый? Спасибо за игру, удачи в создании дальнейших игр!

Здравствуйте. Да, я повторил баг, попробую исправить как можно скорее. Спасибо за обратную связь!

Баг поправлен, можете попробовать новую версию.
Спасибо еще раз!

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I'm stuck at family information. How can I find the partner and child info? I tried everything and I can't find it

Hello! Try to look in Victoria chat...

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I checked it and can't find any useful information. Maybe I'm just blind xd

I was able to reproduce the bug. Wil try to fix it ASAP. Thank you for your patience!

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I fixed the bug, you can try a new version.
Thank you for playing!

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i really enjoyed the concept in this game and the immersive story it told! though, i would like to suggest that for the marriage registry part, the partner order should be interchangeable. initially, i entered veronica as the first partner, which was counted as invalid and it confused me for a bit. unless the order was mentioned somewhere? 

besides that, thank you for creating this interesting experience!! :-)

Hello! Thank you for your feedback!
About marriage registry part - yeah, i thought about it but it was too hard to implement :(
I would be very grateful if you would rate the game.

oh, i somehow didn't notice the rating button; i've lurked a lot on here but only recently made an account. i've done so now! pity about that part, but, i look forward to what else you create !

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Congratulation, the game is really immersive (I finished it). One thing that I like, is that even if I understand the truth, I keep going on, knowing the tragical behind it.

Perhaps something you could add for an even more immersive, is some sort of interruption of current life: some chat sound alarm coming from your boss/mother, someone knocking at the door, things like that.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you for playing and constructive criticism!

I thought about it, but I didn't have time to finish.
It turns out that replicating the operating system in a game is a lot of work :((
Maybe I should release version 1.1

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I got hyper excited for this one and it took me a while to edit the video and publish the gameplay, but, it's here!!! 
Now, for the review, you can hear the joy in my voice, while playing and what a craft this game is! It reminded me a lot of detective driven, interactive games, but with unique style and color palette. Unfortunately, I could not finish the game, due to the reasons mentioned in the video and I do hope to find out about the ending.
Thanks, once again for making this marvelous game and please, please make a horror game, at least consider making it, you would make me a happiest person. Although, I do realize you have your own schedule and I do appreciate and highly respect your craft. Thanks! 

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Hellooo! As always, thank you for the video and the warm feedback!
It's a shame that you weren't able to finish the game. All you had to do was take away "Master of" from Field study field, as it was already pointed out in Academic Degree dropdown. However, you've already done a great job! I really hope that you still finish the walkthrough and see the ending :)
When it comes to a horror game, I doubt I will do one like this. Just because I am so afraid of horror and do not play them :( I'm sorry.

And thank you again for your continuous support!

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Thank you a lot, I will try to finish it off screen. 
It's okay. It does not need to be full horror. It's that your storytelling and visuals are very impressive and I think you can tackle some dark themes, maybe psychological, maybe detective. 
You have a huge potential and I am looking forward to seeing more from you. Good Luck!

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I knew it!
And the all red ending scree with your name was super eerie. I guess, you really did an amazing psychological story. 

Hooray! You did it!

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Super excited for this one! 
Looks like "Orwell" - game and kind of "Papers, Please", yet, this is gripping, new and refreshing. Looking forward to FelisArmis!